good morning! today we are going to work on are essay's. i will place you into pairs of differing strengths. u will use the following information (along with a transition word worksheet template and peer editing forms). with your buddy you will both work together for each paper to do the following: These are things to look for and DELETE or CHANGE as you work with your buddy: 1. I hope that.... 2. Today I'm going to tell you about... or This essay is about... 3. Fragments 4. Numbered lists of information 5. Thank you... 6. Any place it sounds like a speech. This is NOT your speech! 7. Transitions. Find all of your transitions and highlight any that repeat. Those need to be changed. 8. Anything NOT in MLA format 9. Font larger than 12 point 10. Use the video below to rewrite the introduction. Then rewrite the conclusion to go along with your new introduction (stating the same thing just a different way. after working with your buddy, you will find two other people to use the peer editing form to help you on your paper (find another pair to trade with). good afternoon! today we will work on wtg and than u may continue (if u need) from this mornings lessons. i will ask u to tell me what happened this morning and how far u were able to get. also be prepared to work on genius hour if there is time. love mrs p
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